Liam, your work shows real improvement on the last assignment which is promising for the rest of the course. However: - You handed your work in past the 4pm deadline (your tutor will be informed) - You need more initial research - Consider getting some audience feedback on your finished product.
Work a bit harder on your music magazine and try to be more organised in order to see another improvement in your grade.
Liam, your work shows real improvement on the last assignment which is promising for the rest of the course. However:
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- You need more initial research
- Consider getting some audience feedback on your finished product.
Work a bit harder on your music magazine and try to be more organised in order to see another improvement in your grade.